Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is asserted by some
people
that the students
of institutions study subjects which they are interested in. However
, some individuals convinced
that they should just educate in fields which are practical in Add a missing verb
are convinced
future
. Both sides present logical arguments which will be elucidated followed by my own take on the matter.
On the one hand, studying whatever they enjoy it
takes priority in some Correct pronoun usage
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people
's opinion. The first
compelling reason is that person's employability. in other words
, when students
accomplish their tasks out of interest in their subjects they can be widely successful and have impressive results.This
in turn paves the way for upcoming opportunities to have a job in their favourite major. An example of the situation is a
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kindness
and energetic nurse who has chosen Replace the word
kind
this
major at university because she enjoys it.Thereby, she fulfills
her rules in the best and correct way.Change the spelling
fulfils
Moreover
,a sense of satisfying
and self-conscientious are Replace the word
satisfaction
of
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apply
importance
. To put it another way, when the pupils love what they study, they fill with Replace the word
important
plethora
of contentment, Add an article
a plethora
the plethora
also
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which also
cause
an intense rise in one's self-reliance.
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causes
However
, others advocate the idea of studying what is useful for their future
.To begin
with, more chances of employment they
can have in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
future
.Under this
circumstance the students
not only have not
difficulties financial but Correct your spelling
no
also
they
can accommodate the cost of living effortlessly.Take a doctor,who Correct pronoun usage
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not
interested in Add a missing verb
is not
hospital
as an example;his material possession is more Correct article usage
a hospital
what
they think.Correct word choice
than
This
person would no longer have problems with make
a living. Change the verb form
making
Furthermore
, society
demand is of importance.Simply put, some fields are vacancy as well as the country needs professional Change noun form
society's
people
for them. Therefore
, by educating these practical subjects they can eliminate these requirements.
To conclude, I would tend to side with those support
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who support
students
who studying
whatever they Wrong verb form
study
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are interest
interest
in. It seems because of financial problems and community needs, some Wrong verb form
interested
people
choose to educate what is needed for future
.Correct article usage
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