Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local customs and behaviour. Some pople disagree, they think the host country should welcome cultural differenecs. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
importance of local
customs
in a country
is always debatable and becomes more major issue nowadays with some people
claiming that a visitor of other countries must emulate the local customs
and others reject this
notion by accepting the other people
's differences therefore
, I am examining this
question from both points of view and then
explaining why I believe in this
disagreement
some people
argue that the imitation of local customs
of a country
should be implemented on the people
who visit which is considered out weigh
its drawback. The main reason for accepting is to understand their cultural values and the history of their existence .culteral values Correct your spelling
outweigh
such
as the traditional way of living and ritual importance. It explains that the tradition of a country
is more valued by wearing customary clothes and ornaments. It shows the viewer how the people
lived and be open minded
about their culture
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open-minded
On the other hand
, others believe that the host country
should accept its cultural differences and respect each other. It is often argued that a citizen of a nation should respect and accept the identity and cultural beliefs a
person Change preposition
of a
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apply
their
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to their
country
.people
often have this
opinion because they think that it can cause racial discrimination and ill-treatment of the visitors because citizen
who Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
live
in other parts of the world have Change the verb form
lives
thier
own views and culture Correct your spelling
their
thgat
they practise in various Correct your spelling
that
curcumstances
but if they visited Correct your spelling
circumstances
to
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apply
a
another Remove the article
apply
country
and imitate the customs
unknowingly of that nation can hurt thier
own lifestyle and beliefs
In my opinion,the latter argument is more rational because Correct your spelling
their
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different
diffrent
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different
people
in this
world have Correct your spelling
different
diffrent
virtues and that must be Correct your spelling
different
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respected
repected
to recapitulate , according to the argument for mentioned above one can reach to the conclusion the Correct your spelling
respected
people
of a nation must accept other people
of another country
to respect and welcome thier
cultural Correct your spelling
their
diffrences
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differences
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