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Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local customs and behaviour. Some pople disagree, they think the host country should welcome cultural differenecs. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

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importance of local
customs
 in a
country
 is always debatable and becomes more major issue nowadays with some
people
 claiming that a visitor of other countries must emulate the local
customs
 and others reject
this
 notion by accepting the other
people
's differences
therefore
, I am examining
this
 question from both points of view and
then
 explaining why I believe in
this
 disagreement some
people
 argue that the imitation of local
customs
 of a
country
 should be implemented on the
people
 who visit which is considered
out weigh
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 its drawback. The main reason for accepting is to understand their cultural values and the history of their existence .culteral values
such
 as the traditional way of living and ritual importance. It explains that the tradition of a
country
 is more valued by wearing customary clothes and ornaments. It shows the viewer how the
people
 lived and be
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 about their culture
On the other hand
, others believe that the host
country
 should accept its cultural differences and respect each other. It is often argued that a citizen of a nation should respect and accept the identity and cultural beliefs
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who came
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country
 .
people
 often have
this
 opinion because they think that it can cause racial discrimination and ill-treatment of the visitors because
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who
live
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 in other parts of the world have
thier
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their
 own views and culture
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that
 they practise in various
curcumstances
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circumstances
 but if they visited
to
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another
country
 and imitate the
customs
 unknowingly of that nation can hurt
thier
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their
 own lifestyle and beliefs In my opinion,the latter argument is more rational because
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different
diffrent
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different
people
 in
this
 world have
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different
diffrent
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different
 virtues and that must be
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respected
repected
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respected
 to recapitulate , according to the argument for mentioned above one can reach to the conclusion the
people
 of a nation must accept other
people
 of another
country
 to respect and welcome
thier
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their
 cultural
diffrences
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differences
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