Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There are two bar charts that compare two kinds of information. One illustrates the
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of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Other shows the percentage of adults in various situations. The chart divided
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into four categories: Never married, married, widowed, and divorced. The highest
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became married between 1970 and 1990. 2.5 million
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got married until early 1990. By the start of 1990, there was a downtrend in the
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until 2000. The trend reached its low at 2 million. The divorce rate fluctuated during
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of divorces was recorded in 1980. In 1970, most American adults were married at the rate of 70%. The divorce and widowed rates were very low (under 5%). There were approximately 10% of
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who had never been married.
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individuals and divorces significantly increased. The
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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