Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Certain individuals believe that it is favourable to have colleagues who are agreeing with you
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many decisions while some
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argue that it is beneficial to be friend with individuals who argues for your point. I totally agree with the fact that it is required to have
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who
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with you.
Firstly
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, the essay will explain how the outputs are effective by maintaining
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comprise similar thoughts and
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, it will explain the issues that can be
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aroused
raised
with arguments.
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with,
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can make
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if they are living around a set of
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who poses similar attitudes. It is true that there are differences in behaviour and background of the
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that we met during our daily operations but it is possible to find
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who are maintaining equal opinions.
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we are engaged in hectic tasks in our day-to-day life, those can be easily
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if positive thoughts are given by
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colleagues at work.
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, the Sri Lankan cricket
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could win the Australian series in a promising manner since the current
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members are working with the same mindset.
On the other hand
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, continuous problems are caused
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disagreements. When you are choosing your
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, it is required to find
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with equal thoughts.
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, the relationship can be breached at any time due to an argument making both the parties apart forever.
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, there can be situations where colleagues
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to work together though there are arguments between them. In
such
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instances, the outcome will not be
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acheived
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because it will generate issues always.
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, there was a
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team mate
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who is having different ideas than me.
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, there are so many discussions happening before taking a decision wasting the time of all the
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members. In conclusion, I agree with the fact that
people
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should be closer with
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who are having similarities in their ideas to
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achieve
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effective outputs whereas it will be difficult to gain success with an individual who consists
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a different opinion.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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