The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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The bar charts illustrate information about four various destinations of grad and post alumna admission of the UK after completing their college in the year 2008 .those who started full-time education.
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it is clearly evident both UK alum and postgraduate admission had a similar destination after leaving college as the figures show the majority went for Linking Words
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study and the least figure of them chorused for voluntary Linking Words
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It is obvious that about 17735 graduate students opted for part-time work which is only 1500 people more than the sum of unemployed Fix the agreement mistake
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statistic of unemployment doctor about 16235 students .Correct article usage
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the total of postgraduates who went on to part-time work and Linking Words
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study are close to each other with a difference of 190 people on the figures were 2535 and 2275 respectively.
It is observed that nearly 3500 UK doctors opted for voluntary work which is in a similar proportion to the postgraduates where 345 chose the same ,Linking Words
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it is seen in the case of future study that the sum of alum is 29665 which is the highest statistic in the table ,Linking Words
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about 1625 postgraduates were unemployed that which was very lower than graduates unemployment.Add a comma
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