Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.

The base of any
relationship
is trust and
patience
, which makes the
relationship
more strong
although
telling a
truth
in any
relationship
is important but more important is to tell it at the right time.
Therefore
, in my opinion, I disagree with the statement that telling the
truth
is the most significant consideration in any
relationship
between people. I think
this
way for two reasons, which I will explore in
this
essay.
Firstly
, as an initial point, I would like to say that to maintain a
relationship
one should have
patience
. Of course, we should tell a
truth
but not bluntly and at any time, anywhere.
For example
, my younger sister was taking part in a drawing competition in her school and for
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she was sketching
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drawings at home. Every time she
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me about my opinion and I always motivate her,
although
I know that, she is not making paintings as perfect as they should be, but to keep her morale high I used to praise her always. Surprisingly, she comes
second
in the competition.
Hence
, if I said
truth
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to her, that she not doing so much great, I think she won't come
second
in
class
.
Secondly
, I feel that in any
relation
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we should believe more
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each other rather
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that
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saying anything for the sake of
truth
. My own personal experience is a compelling example of
this
. When I was in my tenth
class
, I faced a lot of troubles in math subject. I remember my math teacher was very helpful in nature, with
patience
she always aid me a lot in practising the math question,
formula
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and equations. If I do any mistake or bring
less
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marks in the
class
, she never punishes me, but very politely she makes me understand my mistakes in the subject. In my final exam, I did very well and pass the subject with good grades in
the
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class
. In conclusion, I feel that in a
relation
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between two people one should have
patience
and should believe in each other.
Hence
, Speaking the
truth
in a
relation
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relationship
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is not always an important consideration.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Honesty
  • Trust
  • Open communication
  • Misunderstandings
  • Hurtful
  • Justified
  • Cultural values
  • Integrity
  • Credibility
  • Blunt
  • Conflicts
  • Subjective
  • Perspectives
  • Relationship dynamics
  • Intimate connections
  • Protective lies
  • Ethical considerations
  • Transparency
  • Diplomacy
  • Authenticity
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