Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays ,there are several types of

transportation

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that people can be used in speed ,safety and reaching

on

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their destinations

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without

traffic inflation and dangerous driving on the roads , and these are called railway

transportation

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system and it has seen the tendency to progress in trains and high-speed metro

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of

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traditional form if

transportation

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like local streets and subways ,so,I agree with providing the infrastructures of

metrolines

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metro lines

more than roads ,and I will confirm my opinion

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some

evidences

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.

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, railways can be connected long distances

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without

traffic phenomenon alongside passengers can be more secured from accidents and

dangerous

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dangers

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of driving

in

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roads,

for example

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japanes

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Japanese

engineeres

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engineers

have been conducted a survey that which is the preference of individual to travel by

the

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train or road and there is a tendency to use from

metroes

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metres

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,at a result,

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behaviour can be decreased in the percentages of accidental events in comparing past.

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, public

transportation

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is more adapted

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the environment because pure energy resources have been used and decreased greenhouse gases ,so it will

prvented

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prevented

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from global warming ,

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Germany

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German

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engineers have

been

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established the new version of engine motors on their trains and they have been

successed

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succeeded

successes

reducing in production of greenhouse gases ,

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, local accessible way is needed to connect domestic places for citizens ,but , these are more suitable in internal city

transportation

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instead

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of metro lines,so the size of a town is important to choose which form of ways are effective for people. To sum up, allocating national

budjet

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budget

must be more spent on

high speed

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rail ways

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railways

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that are secure and convenient alongside

of

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connecting long distances in little time ,

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furthermore

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this

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structure

are

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adapted with the planet.