Nurses should write personal statement for nurse who is looking for job in the UK. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Experts through both the developing and developed world have debated whether the nurses should write about the feelings they have about their profession in their CV or whether the opposite has become the case.personally ,

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strongly advocate the former view. on the one hand, there is ample,powerful,almost daily evidence that the idea of filling CV without putting any thoughts about their field

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it can be detrimental ,especially to the young generation who are more easily affected by its addictive nature and which can result in people feeling more isolated from the society.the central reason behind

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,a person without contemplation in the line of work is just like a machine who do not care about the people's aliveness and only completes their work hours.

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,it is salient for a medical student to have some closeness with the human so she can serve the humanity .

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,the foremost reason behind

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argument is that the nurses apply for a job by keeping in mind the feeling of proximity and closeness with their career.

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because the UK is the centre of the world and people come here from all over the world in search of best treatment as the country rich in the popularity for their sensational staff in the hospitals.

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, it is paramount for the students of any field to know about the emotions about their LINE OF WORK ,SO, when they apply for a job they must know about the profession and the feelings behind it

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, Government should fix the policy of adding some epic words about their career in their CV. In conclusion, I firmly agreed that

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new thought about the personal statement will prove a magnificence success in the field of medicine in the UK.