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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Undoubtedly, the number of road
accidents
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 has been increasing and it has become a problem in many countries, so there is an opinion that the government should enact a law about annual driving exams to prevent
accidents
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. I agree with
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 trend. In order to driver's reckless driving which causes traffic and
accidents
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, there are two reasons why the test of the driver can tackle
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 huge problem.
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, the government enact some new laws every year in order to increase road safety, so drivers should know about new
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,
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, it would impossible for them to obey statutes .
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, if a driver gives a yearly exam on driving
rules
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, they can drive properly and safely on roads.
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, after many years, individuals may forget some
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, as people only take a driving test once in their lives, so they need to remember all forgotten lessons which are crucial in reducing vehicle
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, so the driving approval helps to improve the skills of drivers.
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, in china, trucks are required to take the driving analysis yearly, while cars need only apply once every six years, resulting in more
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 in cars over trucks,
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, it is important for every person to give tests each year. In conclusion, I strongly contend that everybody should definitely give analysis because it helps them to learn new
rules
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 and remember forgotten lessons
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