Development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Ryemouth
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Eyemouth
hamlet expansion, between 1995 and now. Overall, there
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been a significant advancement in
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the smaller
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settlement of
Ryemouth
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Eyemouth
now compared to 1995. At the present moment, farmland and forest which was located in the North-East and South-East of
Ryemouth
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Eyemouth
village in 1995
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to a golf
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and a tennis court.
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, the housing estate in North-west and south-west was
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enlarged and more houses were added
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the current settlement. Moreso, shops located in the former hamlet were modernized
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the restaurant
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restaurant
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, to serve the people variety of
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presently. The hotel
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lacked
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a parking-lot
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parking-lot
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for cars; but at the moment it was added to it. The fish market of 1995
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received attention and residential buildings were raised.The sea which had
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port
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is now a big sea with the cafe maintaining its location. Word count, 170 words.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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