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In the 21st century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays the world is getting closer. With the advancement in technology,
people
 are connecting globally because it is
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convenient
covenient
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convenient
 to travel and have
explicit
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 phone
conversation
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. There are umpteen merits as well as demerits to
this
 development.
However
, in my viewpoint, it has helped everyone to grow exponentially. I will shed some light on the same in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, exports of goods and services have been proliferating. To exemplify, the local embroidered outfits from India are exported to
the
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other parts of the world. Apart from
this
, entrepreneurs are travelling extensively to exhibit their business ideas worldwide.
Moreover
, they are bolstered with
investements
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investments
 from
the
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international clients.
Although
 travelling by plane is exorbitant, it saves time and helps to build
strong
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 network.
Thus
, in
this
process
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 the economy thrives
of
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a country.
Furthermore
, it is a cheaper medium to connect with others
on
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 a video
call
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calls
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, messaging apps,
call
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 and emails. Traditionally it used to cost an arm and a leg to talk with foreign
people
.
However
, with the help of
internet
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 one can make free calls.
Additionally
, during the Covid pandemic, it helped to keep in touch with
people
 around the globe and it
also
 aided to receive timely updates of all the near and dear ones.
Moreover
,
people
 started celebrating birthdays,
marriages
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 over
the
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video
calls
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 because they were unable to go in person.
Consequently
, telecommunication is an important component to stay connected with family members and friends. To summarise, even though for expanding businesses, it is costly to travel
international
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 destinations, it plays a vital role to connect globally.
Also
, calling each other is one of the best ways to stay connected and maintain healthy relations by being a call away.
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