Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.
In contemporary days, elder
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are following a trend, where they would want to live on their own. Use synonyms
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and would like to live with their elders, others seem to support the opposite side of the argument. Linking Words
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essay will discuss both, supporting ideas and opposing ideas and give a final opinion in the conclusion.
On the one hand, with growing, age everybody needs care and health facilities, despite believing Linking Words
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. It is a known fact that the body becomes fragile and weak as one gets old, not to mention various diseases that accompany it, and without anyone to look after, Linking Words
people
might have decreased life expectancy than should normally. Use synonyms
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, when grandparents live in an extended family, their medical bills and home care can easily be done by family members. Linking Words
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however
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for example
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time
with their grandchildren, but only when they live with their families.
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By contrast
, the opposing arguments say that everyone in the family would need to spend Linking Words
time
with their old parents, which appears quite difficult to do with the former's busy working lives. Use synonyms
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, with long working hours, it has now become tough to spare Linking Words
time
for anyone, even the old ones. Use synonyms
Moreover
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in contrast
to the past, everybody desires independence, even grandparents, as if they, too, want to spend their life according to their wishes and not to be confined and restricted by others. Linking Words
For instance
, a lot of times they are not allowed to leave the house and enjoy themselves, which will not be the case when they live on their own.
To sum up, it appears to me that, Linking Words
although
the urge to be self-reliant and having less Linking Words
time
given to elders is prominent, they should not be left alone to live, as these are the years of their lives where they require extra attention and medical assistance.Use synonyms
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