some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

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,
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about countries in the
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and the
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news
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about them is necessary .Some people believe in high school
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should study international
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and some people it is not necessary and it is waste of time. In my opinion, international
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is important but it should be controlled. on the one hand, learning and understanding about the
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and global relations, relations between countries, policy,
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economy is important for everybody that know and its better to start learning in high school because
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their analysis ability,
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increase knowledge about geography, customs and policy and what they effect on each other.
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,
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leads to
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the rise
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of
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their self-confidence and
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students
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can participate in group discussions and learn more .they can think about
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the event
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in the
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and have an analysis for them.
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the war between Russia and Ukraine.
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we know that it is important to learn the
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news
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and it is useful for high school
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but
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we should notice huge
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can tire their minds and impatient for learning other subjects that they need.
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, it may affect their mood and it causes stress due to knowing how the crimes happened during the war,
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, isis executions. In conclusion, learning about the
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and countries is very important and it should be placed as an educational subject, but we should
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control
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of
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and its content to not have
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a negative
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effect on
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global awareness
  • Critical thinking
  • Global citizenship
  • Cultural diversity
  • Communication skills
  • Historical context
  • World affairs
  • Academic subjects
  • Bias
  • Misinformation
  • Age-appropriate
  • Media literacy
  • Educational enrichment
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