some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .
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today
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today's
world
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getting
information
about countries in the world
and the last
news
about them is necessary .Some people believe in high school students
should study international news
and some people it is not necessary and it is waste of time. In my opinion, international news
is important but it should be controlled.
on the one hand, learning and understanding about the world
and global relations, relations between countries, policy, the
economy is important for everybody that know and its better to start learning in high school because Correct word choice
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improve
their analysis ability, Correct subject-verb agreement
improves
also
increase knowledge about geography, customs and policy and what they effect on each other.Furthermore
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the rise
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rise
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rising
of
their self-confidence and Change preposition
in
thus
students
can participate in group discussions and learn more .they can think about Add an article
the event
an event
event
in the Fix the agreement mistake
events
world
and have an analysis for them. for instance
the war between Russia and Ukraine.
on the other hand
, although
we know that it is important to learn the world
news
and it is useful for high school students
but
we should notice huge Remove the conjunction
apply
information
can tire their minds and impatient for learning other subjects that they need. Also
, it may affect their mood and it causes stress due to knowing how the crimes happened during the war, for instance
, isis executions.
In conclusion, learning about the world
and countries is very important and it should be placed as an educational subject, but we should be
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the amount
information
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a negative
students
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