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Some people think it is essential to spend much money on a wedding ‎celebration, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.‎

#people #money #‎celebration
The wedding
celebration
 tradition is very old.
Therefore
, for many people are absolutely important to make everything right and spend
huge
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 amount of
money
 for the event.
However
, others disagree with
such
approach
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 and want to do it in
different
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 way. I will discuss both
of
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points of view and give my opinion in the paragraphs to follow. From one point of view,
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marriage is considered to be a memorable moment for everybody. Traditionally,
costs
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 of the
celebration
 strictly
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 on the married
couple
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 family’s status. Expenses like buying household items, clothes, hosting a place to perform and more others were mandatory. Of course, It varies from generation to generation and from nation to nation, but it becomes common and significant all over the world.
That is
 why many of us suppose that spending
money
 on a wedding is essential.
On the other hand
, some pairs become so obsessive
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idea
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the idea
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 of the perfect
celebration
, that forget about the main topic of
such
event
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 – love.
For example
, many couples get a loan from the bank for the wedding ceremony, because it costs
huge
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 amount of
money
.
Consequently
, following the traditions can bring additional problems for
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just married people. Thereby, many of us, and
first
 of all the new generation, think that spending a lot
to
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the celebration
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celebration
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 is useless. To sum up, I want to share my opinion. Personally, I believe that traditions are still important in
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modern society, but
instead
 of blind following
of
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the old
one
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, we can create new,
that
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 better fit our current needs. And if you still want to spend
money
,
donation
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a donation
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 would be
better
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a better
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 way to do
this
.
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