Some people are of the opinion that people are naturally born as a leader while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Being a leader means a lot in terms of

skills

and experiences,

therefore

whether one is born as a leader or the other, who will learn the

leadership

skills

, it will always be challenging

work

to do. I agree with the statement that, people usually feel that some people are naturally born

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a leader while some feel that

leadership

skills

can be learned. In my opinion, I feel that

leadership

skills

can be learned and I think

this

way for two reasons, which I will explore in

this

essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that nowadays there is

lot

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of expertise enhancement institute, which helps in learning and enhancing

skills

. Even some universities

also

offer few courses on

leadership

abilities. My own personal experience is a compelling example of

this

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when I just joined my new job. In my new job, I have to do a lot of

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presentation

presentaion

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presentation

job

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, sometimes I need to lead my team

also

. I feel nervous at every presentation, so I decide to join an institute to enhance my skill and just after a month there was a significant improvement in me. Now, I lead my team with full confidence and everyone is happy with my effort now.

Secondly

, the presence of basic

skill

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skills

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to learn

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new expertise is

must

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For instance

, if have a passion for their field, things

becomes

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interesting and easy to learn. For any type of

leadership

work

, should have deep interest and dedication for their

work

, only

then

things can be done in a better way. In conclusion, I believe that, if anyone is willing to learn new

skills

and have dedicated

for

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their

work

then

it becomes easy to lead in any field they want.

Hence

, learning experience with passion not only helps in learning

leadership

skills

but

also

helps in our personality development.

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