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Some people are of the opinion that people are naturally born as a leader while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both view and give your opinion

#people #leader #leadership #skills
Being a leader means a lot in terms of
skills
 and experiences,
therefore
 whether one is born as a leader or the other, who will learn the
leadership
skills
, it will always be challenging
work
 to do. I agree with the statement that, people usually feel that some people are naturally born
as
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a leader while some feel that
leadership
skills
 can be learned. In my opinion, I feel that
leadership
skills
 can be learned and I think
this
 way for two reasons, which I will explore in
this
 essay. As an initial point, I would like to say that nowadays there is
lot
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 of expertise enhancement institute, which helps in learning and enhancing
skills
. Even some universities
also
 offer few courses on
leadership
 abilities. My own personal experience is a compelling example of
this
,
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 when I just joined my new job. In my new job, I have to do a lot of
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presentation
presentaion
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presentation
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, sometimes I need to lead my team
also
. I feel nervous at every presentation, so I decide to join an institute to enhance my skill and just after a month there was a significant improvement in me. Now, I lead my team with full confidence and everyone is happy with my effort now.
Secondly
, the presence of basic
skill
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 to learn
a
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new expertise is
must
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.
For instance
, if have a passion for their field, things
becomes
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 interesting and easy to learn. For any type of
leadership
work
, should have deep interest and dedication for their
work
, only
then
 things can be done in a better way. In conclusion, I believe that, if anyone is willing to learn new
skills
 and have dedicated
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 their
work
,
then
 it becomes easy to lead in any field they want.
Hence
, learning experience with passion not only helps in learning
leadership
skills
 but
also
 helps in our personality development.
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