Modern societies need specialist in certain fields, not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the disadvantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, artisans and specialists tend to be revered more than ever and are expected to make societies better. In my opinion,

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these specialised careers must receive

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funding.

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are spurred to perform even better and do benefit

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more as compared to those with less technical careers. Contrary, less technical programmes will have lower attendances owing to lack of funding, as

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will be demotivated and feel hard done by the

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creates a void in certain careers and aspects of

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tertiary education motivates

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to take

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challenging technical subjects and meet the pass requirements.

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who take science subjects that are essential to

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medicine and engineering,

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, deserve

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tuition. Their skills are an asset to humanity. Recently, the community benefitted from the unique qualities of civil engineers who planned and constructed a suspension bridge over a gorge to ease transport problems. The shows the positive effects of aiding technical-related tertiary education.

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, not financially assisting less technical subjects has detrimental effects

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. Unlike those who are technically gifted,

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may feel hard done by not receiving financial aid.

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of artists in any

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means that there is a shortage of people like musicians and linguists. Their faculty is classified as arts, meaning that they do not qualify for governmental aid. They will

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feel neglected and discriminated against because of their subject choices. In conclusion, if the state offers particular tertiary packages, all

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may be motivated to work

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those

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of study.

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, the

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of study not covered by the

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will be less appealing to

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creates a void in certain

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of the community as most

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will flock towards

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that are funded by the state, including those who are less technically talented.