Modern societies need specialist in certain fields, not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the disadvantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, artisans and specialists tend to be revered more than ever and are expected to make societies better. In my opinion,
learners
studying
towards
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these specialised careers must receive
government
funding.
Such
students
are spurred to perform even better and do benefit
the
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society
more as compared to those with less technical careers. Contrary, less technical programmes will have lower attendances owing to lack of funding, as
students
will be demotivated and feel hard done by the
government
.
This
creates a void in certain careers and aspects of
society
.
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State sponsored
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tertiary education motivates
learners
to take
the
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challenging technical subjects and meet the pass requirements.
Students
who take science subjects that are essential to
study
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medicine and engineering,
for example
, deserve
government
tuition. Their skills are an asset to humanity. Recently, the community benefitted from the unique qualities of civil engineers who planned and constructed a suspension bridge over a gorge to ease transport problems. The shows the positive effects of aiding technical-related tertiary education.
Conversely
, not financially assisting less technical subjects has detrimental effects
to
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society
. Unlike those who are technically gifted,
arts
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students
for example
may feel hard done by not receiving financial aid.
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of artists in any
society
means that there is a shortage of people like musicians and linguists. Their faculty is classified as arts, meaning that they do not qualify for governmental aid. They will
also
feel neglected and discriminated against because of their subject choices. In conclusion, if the state offers particular tertiary packages, all
learners
may be motivated to work
towards
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those
areas
of study.
However
, the
areas
of study not covered by the
government
will be less appealing to
learners
.
Also
,
this
creates a void in certain
areas
of the community as most
learners
will flock towards
areas
that are funded by the state, including those who are less technically talented.
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