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computer these days can translate all kinds of language with greatee accuracy.Hence, our children will not need to learn more language in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that nowadays, computers like a laptop can translate
avarious
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various
languages
 with awesome accuracy which maybe lead to our
next
 generation do not need to study more foreign
languages
 in upcoming days. But it seems to me that the advantages of learning a foreign
language
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outweigh
outweight
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outweigh
 the disadvantages of not learning.
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language
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 would help to reduce academic stress on studying
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absolutely
absoultely
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absolutely
 different
language
 itself.
As a result
,
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student
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 could spend more time to relax
themselves
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or
do
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 something more enjoyable like sports, playing
a computer games
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computer games
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, and
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watching
wating
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watching
 movies.
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, in terms of
educational
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aspect
, the
student
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another subject
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 like mother
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language
langauge
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language
 which
help
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 to love their unique culture and affect
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 patriotism.
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 the other hand,
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learning more
language
 have
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 effect
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economical
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aspect
. because
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a student
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student
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students
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 who can speak
a
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various
languages
 easily adapt
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globalization
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a globaliztion
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globaliztion
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globalisation
 environment. It helps
student
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 who becomes the master of a
natioanl
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national
 future economy to gain enormous contract in the overseas.
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 it makes
easy
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 to make foreign friends
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 with computerized
language
 skills. I think it is the best way to make friends from person to person with direct conversation. To sum up, I guess that learning more
languages
 for our students has more merits than drawbacks, Not only
educational
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aspect
, but
also
economic
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the economic
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aspect
. So, we have to encourage our students to learn more
languages
, and I think that it would be our society more rich and cultural.
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