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Some people believe that allowing children to make decisions on every day choices such as food, clothes, entertainment will result in a society of individuals who think only of themselves, others are of the opinion that decision should be made about issues which affect them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Effective Decision making is a crucial life skill that humans should be able to make. Giving children free rein from a tender age regards decisions that affect them may be seen as breeding selfish humans to some.
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 explore my decision. Being involved in choices that affect you as a person and individual
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 a person to be able to experiment with their likes and dislikes and create a greater sense of independence and understanding of one's self. It creates an avenue for self-expression and knowledge of self.
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 would overall provide a positive effect on the mental health of a person On the other ,hand though a kid is still a minor and needs guidance and direction from an adult. The general consensus would be that a parent would make a decision on behalf of a minor based on the best interest of the offspring . For , a 9-year-old kid wants to attend a function of an aunt even though children are not allowed at the event. By allowing their ward to go to the event. It sends a clear message that one can be selfish  My opinion remains that while there are truths to both sides, making decisions
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 own issues is still the best option
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