People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?

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hold a view that residents in many countries, special the developed countries have less

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for their families than many gen before. In

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issue and propose solutions to tackle it. There are several origins that lead to

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, more

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in the office makes them have no

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for close relationships.

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means, our society

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and more developed and the demands of humans raise in the overview that leading to the matter is the employee

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to

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more and more to serve the needs of society. Take a good example of it is China, which country climb

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world. and

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the Chineses have to

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very hard to respond to the public.

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, in 2 recent years, 2020 and 2021, the rate of birth diminish tremendously compared with 4 recent decades.

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, many

people

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have leisure

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,

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and have a day off but

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of spending

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with their family, they usually use it for many recreation devices like a

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3.

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, there

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some practical solutions to alleviate these problems.One of the most viable ones is that the state and many cooperations need to release the policy to solve

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problem and encourage their staff to use their days off for family.

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to balance our

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between

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and family. For many families, the children always need the caress of their parents, so spending leisure space with children is necessary. That makes them grow in love and know the love and sense between

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to

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.

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, Angelina Jolie, a well-known actress on

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global,

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the greatest actress

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a great mother of six kids. She is good at in balance

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for acting and her children. To conclude, I suppose the cause of

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phenomenon is that communities in many nations care less for family. In order to tackle these issues, I think each

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needs to

learn

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balance

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her

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life

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many close relationships.