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Television is dangerous because it destroys the family tie and community spirit. It is said by some that television absorbs so much of people’s time that they have no time to talk to each other. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Some people might say that watching
televisions
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 can destroy the warmth between families as it takes so much
time
 and eventually
lead
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 to no talk between family
members
.
Although
 I accept that there are some negative impacts about that but I disagree about the statement.
First
 of all, most
of
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the
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family
members
 enjoy spending
time
 together while watching their
favorite
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programmes
programmmes
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programmes
 as it is one kind of relaxation to release
stress
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 they have suffered from their work or school. At that
time
, they can create stronger bonds between them by discussing and giving opinions about the script and sharing pleasure.
Moreover
, some TV shows have positive effects on families as they not only include daily activities, problems and challenges
within
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 family
members
 but
also
 family love and tie. They can transmit valuable spirit within community and society as a kind of entertaining rather than educating based on the fact that most
of
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the
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people love to
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receive
recieve
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receive
 messages through enjoying
entertainments
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 and programmes.
On the other hand
, some disadvantages can be seen in some people who spend too much
time
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watching TV and become addicted, they might tend to neglect other
members
 and that kind of
behavior
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 will destroy the relationship within families.
In addition
, those with television dependency can have communication and social problems in the community as they become isolated and their interpersonal skills need to be improved. In conclusion, while there are some negative effects in society due to
TV
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such
 as addiction and dependency, I accept it takes part an important role in creating
good
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 atmosphere in society as good things
such
 as getting family
time
 together and conveying proper knowledge can be received through entertainment.
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