Write a letter to a friend who you spent a weekend with helping to move and hosting a party. Include in your letter What you like most about the new apartment What you did over the weekend Where and when you would like to meet again

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Dear Sam, Hope you are doing fine. It was nice to have you over the weekend, and for being on your toes to shift my luggage to the new home and making arrangements for the housewarming party.

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to move to a new location but now I feel comfortable in my new place. I like the neighbourhood and the plethora of recreational activities around me. In fact, I started hitting the gym and feel energetic.

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weekend was hectic and I am glad that we could unbox all the household items and organise them neatly before the party.

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, the party was rocking and everyone savoured the scrumptious meal that you had ordered. I have bought a brand new state-of-the-art television set to watch movies,

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, I am bored watching them alone. Come over the weekend and we can watch any of your favourite movies while munching flavoured popcorn. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Devika

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

163 words

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