A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give contact details for when you are away 2. give instructions about how to care for your pet 3. describe other household duties

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Dear Amin Reza, How are you? hope

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letter finds you well.I am writing

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letter to express my plan for a holiday. As you know, I will go on the travel at the weekend and I want to how you will aid me to keep my house and my pet.

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, I should say I have been working until Friday and after ,that I go to Dubai by aeroplane for three days and you can connect with me every time if you have a question about my equipment or pet with a phone ,especially by Whatsapp application. I am used to caring for my pet with three instructions which are: two meals , having a shower every day and hanging out in the park, to be honest, It is fully vital for her. And in the

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end I should say Friday night must take out the bin because just junk care comes twice a week. Thank you for helping me and everything. Best wishes, Saeed Foroughi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

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8 paragraphs

167 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. give contact details for when you are away 2. give instructions about how to care for your pet 3. describe other household duties

Some people think that it would be better for large companies in the industry to move to regional areas outside large urban cities. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantageous.

Some people believe that parents have great influence on children's growth, but others think that influence from the outside plays a more important role. Discuss both test views and give your own opinion.

Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?v

Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.