Some people believe that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions.

There is a continuous argument that getting pupils for their careers should only be the main focus of

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, whereas many

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believe that

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have additional purposes. The purpose of

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essay is to analyze both sides of the argument and

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it's widely believed that

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system should only concentrate on providing knowledge for

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, which is essential

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their

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is that it helps

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to have

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and to earn more money in the future.

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who are sufficiently knowledgeable

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fields are appreciated by employers when they’re interviewed. One good illustration of

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is a medical college is preparing their

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for practice regularly, which helps them get a good position, so the academic organization plays an important role in interviewing. The

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point is that it leads to a better workforce which gives benefits to

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benefits

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by increasing productivity and determining that employers have the necessary

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they require.

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, it is often argued that in fact there are

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advantages of school having other

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.

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often have

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opinion because

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should teach

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skills to make them well-rounded,

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as communication skills and how to use technology. In today’s modern

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, the ability to communicate and use technology, which

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system should teach pupils, is essential. It’s a good example of

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is that

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who have better social skills will easily get a good position in companies as well as in

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.

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, it’s necessary for

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to teach morals and ethics.

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will make

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better. Humans are the foundation of

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, so if

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have

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,

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will develop. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,

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, I feel that learning systems should have additional functions. It’s because if

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are well-rounded, they will be more successful in their lives and contribute more to

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