Some people believe that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions.

There is a continuous argument that getting pupils for their careers should only be the main focus of

schools

, whereas many

people

believe that

schools

have additional purposes. The purpose of

this

essay is to analyze both sides of the argument and

then

I’ll give my own opinion. On one side of

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it's widely believed that

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system should only concentrate on providing knowledge for

students

, which is essential

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their

employments

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employment

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. The main reason

of

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this

believing

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is that it helps

students

to have

better

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a better

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career

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careers

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and to earn more money in the future.

People

who are sufficiently knowledgeable

in particular

fields are appreciated by employers when they’re interviewed. One good illustration of

this

is a medical college is preparing their

students

for practice regularly, which helps them get a good position, so the academic organization plays an important role in interviewing. The

second

point is that it leads to a better workforce which gives benefits to

society

.

This

benefits

society

by increasing productivity and determining that employers have the necessary

labor

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they require.

On the other hand

, it is often argued that in fact there are

also

advantages of school having other

function

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functions

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.

People

often have

this

opinion because

schools

should teach

students

skills to make them well-rounded,

such

as communication skills and how to use technology. In today’s modern

society

, the ability to communicate and use technology, which

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system should teach pupils, is essential. It’s a good example of

this

is that

people

who have better social skills will easily get a good position in companies as well as in

society

.

Moreover

, it’s necessary for

schools

to teach morals and ethics.

This

is because

this

will make

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society

better. Humans are the foundation of

society

, so if

people

have

good

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characteristic

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,

society

will develop. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel that learning systems should have additional functions. It’s because if

students

are well-rounded, they will be more successful in their lives and contribute more to

society