You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college. In your letter, you should tell: · how you lost the certificate · why you need it · what you expect the principal to do.

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Dear sir, I am William, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about

missing

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the missing

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apply

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certificate

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. Which I collected yesterday from the institution. While I was on my route to back home. I

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encounter

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heavy rain with fast wind. Unfortunately, I was riding the bike and

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certificate

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the certificate

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was placed on

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cover of the bike. Due to heavy rain,

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to stop the bike at many places. I am not sure

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where it can be lost.

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certificate

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is significant for me

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my career. In the campus

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I have already

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by one of the best software

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. Now they requested me to send the

certificate

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for processing my employment. They have allotted me

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short time to join, without

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certificate

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that will be not possible. So it is my humble request you to re-issue another

certificate

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as soon as early. Whatever it will cost I am ready to pay. Tomorrow afternoon I will visit the college. So I can collect the

certificate

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. Please give the instructions to your staff to prepare it. Please consider it as

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matter and Speed up the process. I

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you understand my situation and I am looking for your

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response.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

208 words

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