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Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

#people #diet #exercises #reason #lifestyle
In
this
 modern world, rapid increase in
people
 becoming obese and lack of fitness. There are various causes for these problems and each problem can be dealt with particular solutions so that
people
 can live a healthy
way
 of
life
. It is likely that major
change
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 in lifestyle due to remarkable
advancement
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advancements
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 and sophistication in technology
which
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apply
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have
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 an impact on our daily
life
 and
health
.
These
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 progress comes with
adverse
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an adverse
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effect
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effects
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 on our
health
 due to
lack
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a lack
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 of physical
exercise
 and being lazy of physical
exercise
 and being lazy at home and office. At the office,
people
 have to cope
up
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with the challenges in their
endeavors
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.
Therefore
, they have to sit for long hours before the computer without any break. Even in the home continues watching
on
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television and taking rest in the bedroom
which
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result
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 in depression, stress, anxiety, diabetes, heart and insane diseases
..
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Moreover
, children play computer games for long hours
instead
 of outdoor sports which affects their
mind
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minds
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 and body.
In addition
, consuming junk
food
 which
are
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 available in fast
food
 stores
worsen
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worsens
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 their
health
. These foods are high in
calorie
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calories
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, cholesterol and fat while at the same time lack of
vitamin
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vitamins
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,
mineral
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minerals
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 and protein and these factors are taking a toll on our
health
. These problems can be solved by both governments as well as
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it everyone’s
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everyone’s
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every one's
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 responsibility to solve unhealthy
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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.
The individual
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 should keep
on
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an
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 eye on their eating habits consume more vitamin and
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protein-rich
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protein rich
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protein-rich
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food
 and
avoiding
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avoid
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 cheap luring junk foods. Government should restrict unhealthy fast
food
 store which is scattered all over every city. Encourage
public
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 to do daily
exercise
, yoga and meditation which relax the mind and body
which
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 help to keep fit.
Besides
 youngsters participate in sports and volunteer communal activity on weekends, which leads to a vigorous
way
 of
life
. To conclude,
sedentary
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way
 of
life
 and cheaper fast
food
 are reasons for
detrimental
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a detrimental
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way
 of
life
, both government and
people
 should take responsibility to follow
healthy
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a healthy
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 diet and regular
exercise
 to lead a healthy
way
 of
life
.
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