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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country

#minutes #facebook #friend #country #news #item #story
,Hi dear Fateme, How are you doing?I'm really glad to receive your letter which was checking up
my
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 country's news nowadays.I'm writing to thank you with regard and give some details about the contagious Sickness that has been proceeding progressively through
last
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 three
year
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 in Iran. In
first
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 six
months
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 people quarantined themselves in their houses and stop working or did their assignments from their houses if it was possible as I interrupted my
working
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in
office
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 and I joined all my appointments virtually. But after the vaccination through
last
 year until now,a significant decrease in the number of victims has happened which leads to a normal lifestyle
however
,more individuals still use face masks in public places in order to prevent the virus contagion. It was great hearing from you and I'm waiting for your
further
 letters too. Hope to see you again Masi
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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