You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words

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Dear Abdulrahman I am writing

this

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letter to inform you I recently moved to a different

house

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. So I wrote

this

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letter in my new home,

actually

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I moved to a new

house

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because there is a lot of noise in my former

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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such

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as contracting, night club and

park

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parks

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, but

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this

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moment I am at my lovely

house

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, so let me describe my

house

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for you it’s a modern

house

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of three bedroom (two king bed and one twin bed),

in addition

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to that my master room had a wonderful garden view,

also

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there is a comfortable dining room with a sea view,

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however

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there is a good

facilities

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at my new

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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, so I lived in my dream

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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, but there is some noise coming from my

neighbors

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neighbours

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so it

is makes

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me curled man .

finally

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, I would like to invite you

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my amazing

house

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to see it. See you soon Aziz

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Environmental protection should be the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.