You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit Write at least 150 words

#house #friend #visit

Dear Abdulrahman I am writing

this

letter to inform you I recently moved to a different

house

. So I wrote

this

letter in my new home,

actually

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I moved to a new

house

because there is a lot of noise in my former

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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such

as contracting, night club and

park

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parks

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, but

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this

moment I am at my lovely

house

, so let me describe my

house

for you it’s a modern

house

of three bedroom (two king bed and one twin bed),

in addition

to that my master room had a wonderful garden view,

also

there is a comfortable dining room with a sea view,

however

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there is a good

facilities

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facility

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at my new

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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, so I lived in my dream

neighborhood

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neighbourhood

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, but there is some noise coming from my

neighbors

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neighbours

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so it

is makes

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makes

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me curled man .

finally

, I would like to invite you

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my amazing

house

to see it. See you soon Aziz

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

157 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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