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The line shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the
vehicle
 theft that happened in
the
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Great
Britain
, Sweden, France and
Canada
 respectively. It is been categorised by the number of stolen
vehicles
 in thousands with its respective years from 1990 to 1999. Overall, the highest
vehicle
 heists were noted in Great
Britain
 compared to the other countries throughout the years,
however
, the lowest robberies were found in
Canada
. A
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comparison
comparision
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comparison
 between the two countries, where the majority of
vehicles
 are being robbed, namely Great
Britain
 and Sweden, shows that
Britain
 has a zig-zag trend from 1990 to 1990.
This
 includes reaching the highest level of
vehicle
 thefts twice to twenty thousand in 1993 and 1997, and lowest in 1994 and 1999 about sixteen thousand.
In addition
, the
vehicle
 theft ratio in Sweden seems incremental from the very beginning till 1999 with an exceptional year, in 1991, when the robberies were controlled by approximately 1000
vehicles
.
On the other hand
,
although
 France and
Canada
 could be considered safe for
vehicles
 because of the low crime rates compared to other countries, France had a slight incline in
vehicle
 safety issues throughout the years.
Canada
,
additionally
, had a slight high stolen
vehicle
 ratio at the beginning of 1990, but it can be seen that the situation had been improved since
then
.
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