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the goverment should spend more money on public services rather than wasting money on the arts. to whar extend do you agree od disagree?

#goverment #money #services #arts #whar #od
In
this
 modern world, it's been always discussed that
government
 should spend more money on public
services
 rather than spending more on the arts. Though we have multiple facilities given by the
government
 its very important to invest in public transport and
services
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss its advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, It's a proven method that nations which gave much importance to public
services
 like free transport and ration had become a most developing country
among
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 the world.
For instance
, In Japan civilians uses local shared transport than their own vehicles,
,
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moreover
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this
 is cost-effective and the authorities get a good profit to rule their party without any lagging. The
government
 should always think of their
people
's welfare in which they can
also
 grow parallelly.
On the other hand
, investing more in art activity would help the country to hold their treasure and historical way of living on the result of tourist income will be more when compared to the other countries.
For example
, Vietnam is a peaceful
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an
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 environmental loving country where there is full of nature involved and
also
 tourist friendly which attracts nature lovers automatically. In my opinion, Hereby I strongly agree that
government
 should spend more currency
towards
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 public
services
 than on arts, because the
government
 should always think of the
people
, by the
people
 and for
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the
th
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the
people
.
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