The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year by year while some people believe that prison is the best way to tackle crime other suggest that community service is more successful Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days population of prisoners is rising annually. A section of society holds a notion that in order to mitigate

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offenders should be sent to jail,while critics

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it and believe that public

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plays a very prominent role in

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reduction.

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aspects hold their own significance, my inclination is toward the latter viewpoint.

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one major reason why people believe in sending prisoners to jail is that punishment help

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a

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realise his mistake. As if a criminal got

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scolded

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and punished

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for it,

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he will think twice to commit

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offence in near future.

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parents scold their children

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their

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mistake

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the child will hesitate to perform

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again in the future because he will definitely remember the punishment received for the mistake made in the past.

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, there are numerous reason to believe that public

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help in

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reduction.

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and foremost, it will help a

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in diverting their mind

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some fruitful act that could bring a sense of responsibility

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them. Particularly involving offenders in some community

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help them to stay busy for the benefit of

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society,

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it will bring a feeling of responsiveness that their

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help

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the nation to grow and prosper.

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will automatically

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. To exemplify, in a recent article published in the Tribune newspaper on 05 th July regarding the life of a prisoner who recently came back after serving his term, it was published that

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serving

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the community

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during his term,

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him remain motivated and

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bring

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joy

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of

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serving the public beside

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he started doing

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services

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my opinion, I believe that serving the community

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a

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to build skills and interest that will

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help in earning

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income,

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will help a

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to earn their basic need. Due to the fact that

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crimes were executed for the sake of money only.

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if an individual gets a chance to earn their livelihood

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it will surely help

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society in reducing

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crime

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. To conclude,

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punishment helps in reducing

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crime

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rate

from

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the nation, the chance to get paid for the work will help a

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to earn and raise their family effectively,

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result

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the

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rate will definitely

reduces

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