These days population of prisoners is rising annually. A section of society holds a notion that in order to mitigate
crime
offenders should be sent to jail,while critics
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it and believe that public
service
plays a very prominent role in
crime
reduction.
Although
both
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aspects hold their own significance, my inclination is toward the latter viewpoint.
To begin
one major reason why people believe in sending prisoners to jail is that punishment help
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a
person
realise his mistake. As if a criminal got
for his
crime
and punished
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for it,
then
he will think twice to commit
such
offence in near future.
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parents scold their children
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their
first
mistake
then
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again in the future because he will definitely remember the punishment received for the mistake made in the past.
On the other hand
, there are numerous reason to believe that public
service
help in
crime
reduction.
First
and foremost, it will help a
person
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some fruitful act that could bring a sense of responsibility
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them. Particularly involving offenders in some community
service
help them to stay busy for the benefit of
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society,
it will bring a feeling of responsiveness that their
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the nation to grow and prosper.
This
will automatically
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crime
. To exemplify, in a recent article published in the Tribune newspaper on 05 th July regarding the life of a prisoner who recently came back after serving his term, it was published that
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during his term,
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serving the public beside
this
he started doing
such
services
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.
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my opinion, I believe that serving the community
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a
person
to build skills and interest that will
consequently
help in earning
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income,
this
will help a
person
to earn their basic need. Due to the fact that
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crimes were executed for the sake of money only.
Hence
if an individual gets a chance to earn their livelihood
then
it will surely help
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society in reducing
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crime
.
To conclude,
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the nation, the chance to get paid for the work will help a
person
to earn and raise their family effectively,
as a
the
crime
rate will definitely
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.