Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Improvements in

health

,

education

and trade are essential for the development of poorer

nations

.

However

, the governments of wealthier

countries

should take more responsibility for helping the underdeveloped

nations

in

such

areas. Developing and Industrialised

countries

have divided today’s world, where the main difference between them is the amount of money that governments apply

in

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vital sectors

such

as

education

,

health

and commerce. Because of unbalanced finance, most of the poorer

countries

buried

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in debts, which reflects in reduced

health

care, an unstructured

education

system and weak international trade.

This

vicious cycle will continue indefinitely unless wealthier

nations

show interest in minimising the worldwide economic differences, as well as taking more responsibility for assisting less fortunate

countries

. Most

of

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African

countries

live in inhuman conditions because of

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extreme poverty, upheaval, hunger, disease, unemployment, lack of

education

and both inexperienced and corrupt administrations. The devastating consequences of the AIDS epidemic in those

countries

could improve if the infected population were to receive free drugs to control the disease, have access to

health

professionals and get information on how to prevent its spread. But

this

can only be achieved through international help programs in which leaders of the world’s wealthiest

countries

donate medicine and send doctors and nurses to treat and educate those in need.

Moreover

, most

of

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developing

countries

rely on selling agricultural products and raw materials to rich

nations

and buying industrialised products from them, resulting in a substantial financial deficit.

Consequently

, they borrow a significant amount of money from the World Bank to try to improve their broken economies, but sometimes the money disappears with no significant changes, and they cannot even pay the interest to the bank. Regarding

this

issue, the G8, comprised of leaders of the eight most prosperous

nations

, decided to forgive billions of

dollars’

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worth of debt owed by the world’s poorest

nations

.

Besides

, they developed adequate loan programs to assist those

countries

financially. In conclusion, leaders of the industrialised

countries

play an indispensable role in assisting developing

nations

in dealing with essential areas

such

as

health

,

education

and trade.

Also

, their aid is the key to breaking the vicious cycle, which results in poverty and death.