You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why would be a suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to apply for the position that you have posted in an advertisement in the Australian magazine

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week. From

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posting, I understand that you are looking for a live-in nanny for a certain period to look after your six-year-old child. I am interested in

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role since I am passionate about taking care of and teaching children. In lieu of

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, I have been taking classes as a pre-school teacher. I understand

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that

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will be located in a different country of my origin, despite

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, I see

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as an opportunity to learn more about the Australian culture since I have never been there before. Aside from the fact that

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position will benefit me truly as I mentioned above, I believe that I am well suitable for

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role due to a variety of reasons. One of them is that I am at the top of my class which enables me to teach your child very well.

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, I

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have experience as a nanny for my nephews and nieces for over 6 years now. Since I will be living with your family for 6 months and I will be away from home, I plan to do several recreational activities during my free time.

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, I will be going to famous sightseeing spots since it is my

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time in Australia.

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, I would like to see iconic animals

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as the koalas and kangaroos since I have never seen them in person. Thank you for

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opportunity to share my interest in

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role. I am really looking forward to your favourable response and hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

283 words

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