The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the changes in the
proportion
of households owning electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.
The proportion
of families who have a refrigerator saw a sharp and dramatic growth from 0% in 1920 to 100% in 1980, standing at this
level until 2019. Similarly
, the figure
for vacuum cleaner ownership rose apparently from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and remained at 100% for the rest of time
. Correct article usage
the time
In contrast
, the percentage of households who had washing machines saw a different pattern. Its figure
increased from 40% in 1920 to 70% in 1960 and then
dropped down to 63% in 1980; finally
, it rose again to 73% in 2019. Meantime, The number of hours of housework per week per household
kept decreasing from 50% in 1920 to 11% in 2019.
The proportion
of families who have a refrigerator saw a sharp and dramatic growth from 0% in 1920 to 100% in 1980, standing at this
level until 2019. Similarly
, the figure
for vacuum cleaner ownership rose apparently from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000 and remained at 100% for the rest of time
. Correct article usage
the time
In contrast
, the percentage of households who had washing machines saw a different pattern. Its figure
increased from 40% in 1920 to 70% in 1960 and then
dropped down to 63% in 1980; finally
, it rose again to 73% in 2019. Meantime, The number of hours of
To summarize, the proportion
of the ownership of all the
three electrical appliances roses, with Correct article usage
apply
refrigerator
and vacuum cleaner Correct article usage
the refrigerator
reaching
100%. The number of hours of housework kept dropping.Wrong verb form
reached
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