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The bar chart provides data about the residents' percentage in purchasing and drinking habits of tea and
coffee
 in five cities in Australia. Overall, the
coffee
 and tea in cafes are the most enjoyed in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart, while Adelaide buys more instant espresso than other types. In Sydney and Melbourne, a significant proportion of their residents drink tea and
coffee
 in cafes, at around 61% and 64%, respectively. In these two regions, the proportions of fresh products are over half of the cafe beverages, between approximately 41 and 43; meanwhile, the sachet product reaches higher than the fresh by 1 to 5. Instant caffeine in Brisbane and Hobart account for about 52 and 54, the two highest figures compared to other cities. The cafe visitors in these cities are slightly bigger than the prior by 3 to 8 respectively. Fresh espresso shows the smallest number at around 34 and about 38%.
In contrast
, the caffeine cafes in Adelaide account for just under 50, almost similar to instant espresso. Fresh
coffee
 is
also
 the lowest number in that survey, just like Brisbane's.
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