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Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

These days, it is mandatory to wear
dress
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 codes for
employees
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 at workplaces and other corporations. The main advantages of
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 trend are it makes it easy for
people
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 to recognize the brand and reduce the expenditure associated with buying
clothes
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. Lack of freedom to wear their choice of
clothes
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 and low-rank
people
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 tend to feel shame. The primary advantage of wearing a
dress
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 at a workplace is that it promotes a
company
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's brand.
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 is because, when a worker wears a
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, anyone can recognize easily which
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 he/she works for.
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, Wearing uniforms saves
employees
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 money.
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 is to say that nowadays, our living expenditure is increasing so prices of everything we need are going up.
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, if a
company
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 has a
dress
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 code,
people
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 do not have to worry about the cost of purchasing
clothes
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 for the workplace.
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, it has been surveyed in Canada that
people
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 usually waste 30% of their total income
to buy
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 fashionable
clothes
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 to wear at work and
people
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 who have
dress
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 codes at the workplace can save that much amount of money every month. The main disadvantage is that workers do not feel free because everyone likes to look good and they want to wear trendy dresses.
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, wearing every day the day colour and the same style makes their life boring and dull. So they do not feel the liberty to decide on their own
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.
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,
people
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 often feel shame to wear uniforms because every worker has a different
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 according to their rank.
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, low-rank
employees
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 feel embarrassed in front of the customers and it brings a sense of inequality between
employees
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.
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, when I was working as a customer care assistant in a shopping mall, I used to get upset because my
uniform
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 was different from my manager's. In conclusion, having a
uniform
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 in a
company
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 has advantages
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 as it helps in promoting the brand, and it reduces the cost of shopping for
clothes
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.
Employees
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 do not feel freedom, and it
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 makes them feel low are the main disadvantages.

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