Many animal species are becoming extinct as the result of human activities.what are the cause and possible solution to this problem?

Humans have a greedy nature and are always dependent on others, like grains from plants and meat from

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at the causes followed by solutions to save

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animals

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species

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. To start with, humans overcome their natural weakness by utilising other resources,

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, to keep themselves warm they start killing bears for their fur, and it is happening for centuries which put polar bears and other fur

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on the verge of extinction.Deforestation is

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the main reason

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natural habitats

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diminished which put many

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to extinction.

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is a flightless bird which

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now limited to few numbers because humans overtake forest lands for farming and personal usage.Medical benefits

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played a vital role where certain

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were killed frequently which

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put them on the verge of extinction.

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, tigers were killed for multiple health benefits in China. Tiger bones are

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utilised for medicines. In order to save

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species

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,laymen have to find alternatives for most of the items which are coming from

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of synthetic leather

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of natural leather,

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would save millions of

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from killing.Strong International law should be enforced so that all countries

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, tigers are conserved in India,

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however

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there is a huge demand

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Tiger bones and meat which forced

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poachers

to kill and trade them in China.If

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regulation

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all over the world,

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demand will not exist and

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tigers will not be killed for benefits. In conclusion,

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have to understand the importance of all

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because they played a vital role in the ecosystem.

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played a crucial role in the development of

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plant and trees.If one chain is broken automatically

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life cycle chain broke, impacting nature and

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human is the one which will face the consequences.