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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.

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Many people nowadays think that resting the min in our free time could help us relax meanwhile others like me believe that it is better to read or do word puzzles in our leisure time. I will be discussing why I agree and believe that doing that will help us increase our abilities in
English
.
Firstly
, reading books can help us with
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 we struggle with
such
 as reading, writing, spelling as well as vocabulary. By doing so we can gain knowledge and refine our
English
 skills.
Furthermore
, reading books can help us to better concentrate whether on work or lessons we have to attend
Secondly
, word puzzles can open up our minds in many different ways that will help us in the future
such
 as learning many new words you never knew about,
In addition
,
this
 will make us realize what
level
 of
English
 we have and how we can
further
 develop it to an entirely new
level
 that was beyond our
level
.
Lastly
,
this
 increases our knowledge in many ways and many different fields you never
level
 entered before. Even more, we will be at a high
level
 that we will be able to teach many people new words of
English
. And by resting our brain we will be lazy as the brain is always working and asking questions. To add even more, Resting the brain in our leisure time can be good but that
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 makes us tired and not want to do anything except for laying down and resting for as long as we want. Overall, These are the main reasons
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why I agree to a high extent as I think that it is the right thing to do when we are not busy at all.
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