The ways people interact with each other have been changing dramatically for the past thirty years because of text messaging. In what ways has text messaging affected the types of interactions people have? Has this become a positive or negative development?
In
this
present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise, this
totally changed the way people
keep in touch with each other, such
as increasing distant
interactions and decreasing Replace the word
distance
Add a hyphen
in-person
in person
talk. It is agreed that Add a hyphen
in-person
text
messaging becomes a positive development.
Text
messaging is an online connection tool which can give people
more satisfaction. For example
, if people
keep far away from their family, like working in another city or study abord, they give a message
by texting to change a long distance into a heart-to-heart connection easily. It is a good way for them to share the things which happened recently to
their family members, Change preposition
with
also
to decrease their Correct word choice
and also
homesick
.
Replace the word
homesickness
However
, text
message
also
has some diverse effects. For example
, using words cannot express people
’s current feelings exactly. Using different emotion
to give the same sentences might have a different meaning. Fix the agreement mistake
emotions
In addition
, texting message
spends people
a lot of time. If people
want to discuss a business case, they cannot just test words to express their ideas clearly. This
would decrease the working effectiveness. But those drawbacks above can be solved by using different interaction methods. For example
, people
can use video calls in the same apps to express their feeling to others or they can open an online meeting to discuss their different business debates.
In conclusion, although
text
message
sometimes cannot express people
’s feelings or ideas clearly as well as exactly, but
it provides a method for Remove the conjunction
apply
people
to communicate with other person
easily without considering Change the wording
another person
other people
distance
. Add an article
the distance
Thus
, the idea of text
message
Fix the agreement mistake
messages
becomes
a positive development can be supported.Wrong verb form
becoming
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