Zoos are inhumane and pointless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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wasting money and time, while others argue

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and allege that zoos are essential for each community as a source of human knowledge to learn

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nature, increasing a sense of creation, so, I completely disagree with

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statement that presumes the wild gardens are not useful, so, I am going to discuss

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both

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idea to confirm my status. In a beginning,there are many species of animals that are going to vanish from the planet,

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tigers have

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decreased in

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of birth, due to

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phenomenon,

blue birds

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have shown a reduction,

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event has not understood yet, but, there is a coefficient,

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are very important for human life as food resources, so, scientists have been designed a garden that it is suitable for protecting tigers.

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,children must learn from the wildlife that

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considered as a most important part to deal with the environment,alongside,many inventors inspired

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animals to build

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machine, so, zoos may be

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kids,

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has constructed based on eagle's wings.

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sum up, wild gardens have many benefits for

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as the source of inspiration,supplying human

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and educating to youngers that how they can be used and

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with the planet, so, governments must invest

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building these places.