Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is certain that some human activities impact the variation of

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ecosystem

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. Some argued that nothing can be done to improve the situation whereas others believe that we could still

able

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to do something efficiently for

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improvement

improvment

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improvement

. I think that it is never too late to take any action to save our planet.

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essay will discuss

the

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both views in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, some think that there is nothing

can

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help to solve the

dispperance

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disappearance

extintion

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extinction

species

problem. It is undoubtedly that

thounds

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thousands

species

are facing endangerment or already

disppeared

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disappeared

in the planet due to some human activities.

For example

, deforestation of the amazon rainforest

cause

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drought and wildfires, destruction of forest

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destroys

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the

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homes, habits and food sources for the

species

that live there.

Nevertheless

this

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situation

sitution

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situation

is still happening and cannot be stopped or

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down.

This

is the reason why people think they cannot do anything for help.

However

, I still strongly believe

that is

never too late for governments and individuals to do something to save our environment. For governments, they should collaborate

colsely

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closely

and

netgotiate

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negotiate

negotiated

with different countries in

regrad

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regard

to promote any possible and effective

measurments

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measurements

. For individuals, we should increase

people

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awareness of ecological diversity issues. We can start

from

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our daily routine

such

as recycling,

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less,

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less

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plastic products and

also

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others

what

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should do to protect our environment. If everyone can do a little

further

, I believe there will be a big step for the world. In conclusion,

although

some

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human

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the human

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activities are unable to be stopped, in order to help our planet, every communities and

individuals

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individual

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have their responsibilities, no matter work with international or reduce our

dosmetic

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domestic

waste at home.

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