Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is certain that some human activities impact the variation of
species
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. Some argued that nothing can be done to improve the situation whereas others believe that we could still
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to do something efficiently for
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improvement
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improvement
. I think that it is never too late to take any action to save our planet.
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both views in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, some think that there is nothing
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help to solve the
dispperance
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disappearance
of
extintion
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extinction
species
problem. It is undoubtedly that
thounds
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thousands
of
species
are facing endangerment or already
disppeared
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disappeared
in the planet due to some human activities.
For example
, deforestation of the amazon rainforest
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drought and wildfires, destruction of forest
distorys
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destroys
storeys
the
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homes, habits and food sources for the
species
that live there.
Nevertheless
,
this
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situation
sitution
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situation
is still happening and cannot be stopped or
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down.
This
is the reason why people think they cannot do anything for help.
However
, I still strongly believe
that is
never too late for governments and individuals to do something to save our environment. For governments, they should collaborate
colsely
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closely
and
netgotiate
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negotiate
negotiated
with different countries in
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regard
to promote any possible and effective
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measurements
. For individuals, we should increase
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awareness of ecological diversity issues. We can start
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our daily routine
such
as recycling,
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less,
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less
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plastic products and
also
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others
what
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should do to protect our environment. If everyone can do a little
further
, I believe there will be a big step for the world. In conclusion,
although
some
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human
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activities are unable to be stopped, in order to help our planet, every communities and
individuals
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individual
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have their responsibilities, no matter work with international or reduce our
dosmetic
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domestic
waste at home.
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