Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Consumption of prepacked products is increasing in
this
modern world and they may take Linking Words
place
of homely Correct article usage
the place
food
and cookingUse synonyms
would change
. In Verb problem
apply
this
essay, I will agree with Linking Words
this
statement. Linking Words
Firstly
, I will explore the rising number of packed Linking Words
food
and moving forward, I will discuss changes in cooking style.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, we can observe that Linking Words
the
eating habits have changed drastically down the road as we are getting busier in our lives, Change the word
our
although
we don't have even 5 minutes to cook an egg for Linking Words
the
morning breakfast Correct article usage
apply
this
has Linking Words
replaced
with Add a missing verb
been replaced
ready to eat
meals. Add a hyphen
ready-to-eat
For example
, working adults are found Linking Words
of having
a fancy diet rather than eating home-cooked dishes, Change preposition
to have
as
a ,result it is giving birth to the new processed products Correct word choice
and as
such
as bean cans, pickles etc. Linking Words
Furthermore
, societies are tired of preparing healthy foods as both the men and women are working for a living they are not taking care of their health. Linking Words
In addition
, people are moving towards a materialistic world Linking Words
whereas
all are equally fascinated with exploring new cuisine. Linking Words
For Instance
, buying an industrious Linking Words
food
packet from a supermarket and eating it in just 10 minutes is a trend nowadays.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, In Linking Words
this
contemporary society, communities are losing the skills of cooking at home because they are not in the practice of preparing the Linking Words
food
at the house though parents are following the same tradition even their children follow them, Use synonyms
therefore
, It would vanish the ability In a human race. To Linking Words
Illustrate
, parents are changing their buying behaviour by not cooking fresh Fix capitalization
illustrate
dinner
at home Fix the agreement mistake
dinners
Linking Words
this
leads to serious Illness and may cause cancer. Correct pronoun usage
which
Moreover
, social media and technological developments are the main reason for Linking Words
this
problem and people are unaware of the bad consequences that may affect their bodies. Exemplar, adults' wants are never ending and they seek new tastes Linking Words
as well as
, a unique style of having bread.
In summary, traditionally cooked foodstuff is Linking Words
getting vanished
from Wrong verb form
vanishing
the
human culture and industries may come up with developed items for our consumption and make a profit by hurting our diet which is very unethical for human beings. In conclusion, I feel that people are the one who has to change their diet plans and stick with strict organic prepared day meals.Correct article usage
apply
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Enhance the clarity of your position and provide a more balanced discussion with counterarguments.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the organization of your ideas to create a more logical and cohesive structure.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
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