A freiend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. th your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Hi Indi,
I'm excited about your trip after knowing it
last
week and here are some tips to be acknowledged.
I'm sure that you're going to entertain yourself a lot due to many facts. Firstly
, I must say it's totally a different experience which you haven't gone through and the atmosphere at the camping site is priceless. It will be surrounded by nice scenories
where you will not be able to get rid of your eyes. Correct your spelling
sceneries
scenarios
In addition
to that, the most interesting part is making food without essential items. An instant meal will fill your tummy which might be the tastiest food you have ever enjoyed.
Apart from that, there are some instances where you feel inconvenient. You can't expect facilities such
as washrooms, and sleeping areas as you have in a normal room. Moreover
, the journey to climb the camping site will be hard with the narrow road while insects also
may affect your comfort.
However
, I feel like joining your gang since I am also
vacant this
summer. Then
we can enjoy the trip together by collecting many memories.
I am waiting for a favourable reply from you relating to the journey.
Best regards,
Thulya
Correct your spelling
Thuya
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