Some people believe that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions. Discuss both sides and then give your own opinion.

Many

people

hold a belief that schools must have to concentrate on preparing

students

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. While others think that pupils should have additional purposes.

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essay discusses both sides of

this

argument and

then

I will give my own perspective. On one side of the argument, some

people

claim that the primary goal of school programs is to develop

students

’ employment.

This

is mostly due to the potential that graduates will have access to a greater range of business options and earn more money in the future. When candidates are interviewed by employers, those who have appropriate knowledge in a particular field are valued.

For example

, currently, there are many vocational activities organized in academies, so thanks to that pupils will acquire technical

skills

at a relatively young age.

Therefore

,

students

can obtain more experience, practical advice, and valuable teachings.

In addition

, it provides a better workforce, which is useful for society.

On the other hand

, it is

also

possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that additional targets

also

play an important role in the life of

students

.

First

of all, to help pupils become well-rounded, schools should teach them

skills

. Especially, in modern society, soft

skills

are increasingly appreciated. If you possess professional soft

skills

, you will greatly contribute to the success of a business. Because of

this

, companies value soft

skills

highly and consider them among their key qualifications.

For instance

, debating

skills

help

students

convince

people

more easily and logically.

Moreover

, In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

, I feel that

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the learning institution should start paying more attention to vital duties because

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the constant innovation of the times with an increasingly dynamic, stressful and competitive working environment, soft

skills

are an indispensable factor, specifically for young

people