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Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some
people
 base their
career
decisions
 on the
advice
 sought from family and friends while others prefer to make these
decisions
 independently. In my opinion, it is best to find a
career
 with a small amount of
advice
 from family or friends compared to making
career
decisions
 individually.
Firstly
, not only making their
decisions
,
people
 tend to fall ahead of their
career
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careers
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, but
also
 they potentially crave a niche for themselves
at
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in
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workplace
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the workplace
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 as entrepreneurs. With an independent person having enough self-stream, they have every confidence in their ability to assess what jobs
is
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are
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 coming up to all their standards.
Moreover
, they measure up to their expectations and any requirements with choosing a
job
.
However
, some
people
 argue that
career
decisions
 should be made alone, while others maintain that these
decisions
 should be made in consultation with family and friends. Only when
people
 get a lot of
advice
 from
the
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older
people
having
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 already gone the same way, do they seize the chance to choose a
career
 with
casting
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 light on their
job
.
In addition
, one of the most important turning points in
everyone’
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career
 is making use of experienced
people
 to achieve far-reaching
implication
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implications
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 for
job
 prospects and
minimizing
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minimise
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 the risk of the
job
.
Finally
, it is others’
advice
 in choosing a
job
 that could culminate in individual and spiritually developing experience. In Conclusion,
although
people
 are entitled to choose a
job
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in dependently
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independently
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, I am of the view that taking others’
advice
 makes a more significant contribution to
choose
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choosing
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 a great
job
. As far as I am concerned
this
 strategy is a major factor in making good
decisions
 and being successful.
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