Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
For many in authority, getting wealthier takes precedence over other matters,
however
others have argued that there are other components of equal Add a comma
,however
value
in a country
. This
essay will address the necessity of prosperity and other factors
that should be observed in communities
Regarding wealth, this
is a goal that fuels numerous changes within a society. By progressing economically, a country
is able to improve its infrastructure . A good example of this
would be road planning, in many prosperous countries there is extensive
road network that's well maintained every few years by local councils. Add an article
an extensive
In contrast
, some developing countries have poor road networks, this
is usually due to slow advancements made in the economy. Furthermore
a prospering Add a comma
,Furthermore
country
increases in value
. This
is seen in the currency value
where
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its
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is
able
to maintain its Replace the word
ability
value
with little fluctuations. From these points, improvements in the wealth of a country
impacts
it Change the verb form
impact
postively
.
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positively
However
, there are many other factors
to take into account. Apart from the economy, factors
such
as education
are of equal, if not more importance
. Replace the word
important
Education
is the foundation on
which many lofty Change preposition
from
ides
and future plans stem from. Good Correct your spelling
ideas
eduaction
informs the direction of progress. A highly educated Correct your spelling
education
country
will make better decisions afecting
the Correct your spelling
affecting
country
's progress in a number of othe
fields. Correct your spelling
other
For
instance
South Korea's highly educated population are at the forefront of many technological advancements. By placing importance on Add a comma
,instance
education
, numerous companies such
as Samsung and LG became powerhouses as its
employees were innovative. Correct pronoun usage
their
Although
riches may propel a country
forward it is misguided without input from factors
such
as education
.
To conclude, a country
fairs better if its goal is not just to enrich itself with wealth, but to place value
on other contributing factors
such
as education
to advance its economy.Submitted by nyamatakaare92 on
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