Some believe that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while other think it is more important to reward students who show progress. Discuss both views and express your own opinion?

Currently, whether academic rewards should be given to good

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who have made a promotion has become a heated debate. For my part,

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there are arguments supporting that the progress of recruitment should be concerned, I tend to believe that excellent

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should be awarded. On the one hand, I think the honour mechanism and the threshold of the scholarship should be based on

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’ grades. Grades have a vital connection to determining whether a student studies well or not.

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, people care more about the results rather than the process.

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, when human resource departments decide to hire new staff, they will focus on the grade, since it is a symbol of learning ability.

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, the studying records become one of the most important factors, and in view of

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, it is necessary to stimulate recruitment to achieve higher marks by setting an encouragement for them if they manage to realize it, which is a good measure to help them study better.

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, it can be argued that the progress made by normal admission should be awarded.

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concern may sound valid, it is actually short-sighted and fails to consider comprehensive. The

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action is the decrease in learning motivation. Ordinary enlistment may find it is not hard for them to get the reward, as a consequence, they will not try their best to achieve a higher place. Meanwhile, due to the fixed amount of remuneration, if a proportion of reward is prepared for normal ones, the share for the good ones is sharped,

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have a negative effect on good admission.

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, it is not saying that the promotion of

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is not important, but

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can be encouraged in another way,

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, through praise from teachers and parents. To conclude, despite there being arguments to bonus

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who show progress, I reckon that it can be encouraged in an alternative way, and the real reward should be given to the recruitment with the best grades. In

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way, it will lead to the promotion of the whole.