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To solve the problem of traffic congestion govt should provide free public transport 24*7. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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nowadays, Traffic is
one
 of the most problems that governments are concerned about it. many people believe that if we have full-time public
transportation
, it will be solved. In my ,opinion expanding the common facility could be more helpful to the travel affairs.
Firstly
, whenever,
the
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public
transportation
 has support for all 24 hours on 7 days a week,
then
 people could make sure they could
use
 public
transportation
instead
 of using
private
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a private
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vehicle
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vehicles
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.
Then
,
be
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by
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 decreasing of using
the
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private cars percentage of the automobile
in
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 the streets will reduce. For ,instance
in
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,shanghai we have a variety of public
transportation
 24/7. and it helps to carry many passengers and cargo across the metropolitan.
secondly
, Free
transport
 could encourage many passengers in order to
use
 buses, subways or any kind of free
transport
 and they wouldn't
use
 it from their own
vehicle
. in
this
 ,case the amounts of cars will be reduced so much and could solve most part of the traffic matters.
For example
 in Germany students and seniors don't need to pay for public
transportation
. On
one
 ,hand it could be financial support for them. On the other ,hand it could best persuade these groups of people to
use
 the free
transport
instead
 of a single
vehicle
. As a ,
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result
in result
inresult
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result
 the number of
car
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cars
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 or
motorcycle
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motorcycles
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 will reduce by any free
transport
 and could solve the shipment more.
Finally
, if the leaders and governments pay attention to free and full-time public
transportation
, by adding any
one
 single passenger,
one
vehicle
 could stay in the parking and reduce the volume of cars in the street.
then
 it could help to solve the traffic for most cities in the world.
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