You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager and explain what happened. Describe the watch and ask them to help you find it.

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Dear Sir, I am Rahul, being visited your

hotel

last

week . I am writing

this

letter to inform you that have forgotten my watch in your

hotel

room

. I arrived at your

hotel

on 23 may in the morning and rented your

room

.I stay no 134

room

. I go to the

room

freshen

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and freshen

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up .

However

, I was back-to-back meetings in the morning and a video call conference with head office in the afternoon . On

this

day

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am very busy with business meetings. I returned the

morning at 10 a.m . At that time I am in

very

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a very

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hurry so forget my watch in your

hotel

room

Moreover

, the watch is branded company it is a titan brand. Its colour is

brown

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a brown

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belt and its shape is square. It

very

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is very

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crucial for me because it was gifted to my elder sister. Could you please find

this

watch in the

room

? I would appreciate it if you help me . If you search the watch please contact me no 8756353546. I hope for your prompt response in

this

matter. Yours faithfully, Rahul

Submitted by s.a.patadiya on Sat Jul 23 2022

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