You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager and explain what happened. Describe the watch and ask them to help you find it.

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Dear Sir, I am Rahul, being visited your

hotel

last

week . I am writing

this

letter to inform you that have forgotten my watch in your

hotel

room

. I arrived at your

hotel

on 23 may in the morning and rented your

room

.I stay no 134

room

. I go to the

room

freshen

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and freshen

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up .

However

, I was back-to-back meetings in the morning and a video call conference with head office in the afternoon . On

this

day

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am very busy with business meetings. I returned the

morning at 10 a.m . At that time I am in

very

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a very

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hurry so forget my watch in your

hotel

room

Moreover

, the watch is branded company it is a titan brand. Its colour is

brown

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a brown

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belt and its shape is square. It

very

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is very

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crucial for me because it was gifted to my elder sister. Could you please find

this

watch in the

room

? I would appreciate it if you help me . If you search the watch please contact me no 8756353546. I hope for your prompt response in

this

matter. Yours faithfully, Rahul

Submitted by s.a.patadiya on Sat Jul 23 2022

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In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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