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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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With the ubiquitous
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 website available on the Internet, they allow people to express their opinions and hopefully help other consumers to make their decisions wisely.
On the other hand
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, competition between companies may attract abuse of
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 platforms in writing fake
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 of their own products or their competitors' products, hoping to draw the attention of some innocuous prospective buyers. While the usage can be controversial, I am arguing in the favor of writing
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 on those platforms. In
this
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 essay, we will discuss real-life examples and
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 of mobile
applications
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. The benefits of a legitimate
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 are obvious.
First
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 of all, it helps potential customers or users with their research and comparisons. Almost every one of us would have some experience that we felt undecided on the options that we had in our hands, followed by countless hours of searching on the Internet hopefully finding
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 videos or some user experience to aid our decision process. A few good
reviews
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 would reduce the effort needed and allow us to spend time more actually enjoying the
product
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.
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, legitimate
reviews
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 provide valuable feedback to the
product
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 manufacturer or service providers.
This
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 feedback would in turn improve the
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 or service quality. Numerous
product
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 development teams now employ user-driven design strategies and pay for customers to provide feedback just to understand where the
product
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 can be improved.
Reviews
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 on Amazon or mobile application stores provide a precious channel for the customer to communicate with the developers indirectly.
In addition
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 to benefitting the potential users, as well as
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 manufacturers and services providers,
review
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 systems can
also
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 help regulators or
store
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 owners. Consider the case of mobile application stores,
such
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 as the Apple App
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 and Google Play
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 - thousands of new
applications
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 are released every day by developers worldwide. Without
such
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 a
review
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 system in place, it would be virtually inhibitive for Apple and Google to uphold the quality of the
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 available in their
store
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.
This
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 will in turn safeguard the general public from having malicious
applications
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 installed on their devices. There have been cases where mobile
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 which were trying to steal personal information are rightfully removed from their respective stores after receiving legitimate negative
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.
Although
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 one may point out that fake
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 may mislead potential customers, it is not a devastating problem for the whole
review
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 system in general. It is not unheard of for
product
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 reviewers to point out fake
reviews
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 on Amazon and alert their peer readers of the true intent of
such
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reviews
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. All in all, I believe that writing
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 and service
reviews
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 deliver a better experience to the general public, and it outweighs the negative impact of the abuse of
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system
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