Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometime disagree with them.

Some people think it's better to choose
friends
who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have
friends
who
sometime
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disagree with them. In my
view
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it is better to have
friends
who can sometimes disagree with us because when we go out on
an
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leisure trip, we do not want someone who always disagrees with us. On the
otherside
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other side
, when we are taking an important decision in our life, we do not want a
friend
who always
agree
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with us rather than sharing his or her opinion. My
friend
Rohit and I are
friends
from
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school
days
and we are always in constant touch
although
he moved to Australia
few
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years back. Until now, we discuss our career plans and important things in our lives to have our honest feedback, so that we can evaluate whether we are going in the correct direction or not. Rohit is one of my
friend
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who never fears to share his view whether I like it or not. I still remember during my school
days
when I sometimes skip attending my tuition classes to play cricket. He used to go and
complian
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complain
complained
to my parents.
Although
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,
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I like it or not, he did that with a good intention to help me get good grades in my exams. On the other side, We both had thoroughly enjoyed our company from those old
days
. When I moved to Dubai, he came with his
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girlfriend
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girl
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friend
and stayed with us for
couple
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of weeks. We all had good fun and those
days
are unforgettable for
everyone
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of us. Until now, whenever we go to India, we plan our trips
such
that Rohit
also
joins us in India and we plan
few
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a few
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days
together to catch up with our lives. I am fortunate to have a
friend
who can share his suggestion for my own
goodsake
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good sake
good shake
and in the
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same time
sametime
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we enjoy our friendship.
Similarly
, everyone
need
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to have
friends
who can at times disagree with them for
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each other's
eacthother's
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each other's
own benefit.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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